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My Wish

I watched the fading vapor trails
They were so dazzling... I ran away...
I... was always weak.
I let go, frustrated by the fact
That I couldn't stay unchanged since that day
I couldn't stay unchanged... when I met you...

I still can't fly well,
For my wings were broken by illusions...
They were broken... because I trusted too much...
But someday, I believe,
I will know the feeling of cutting through the wind.
For I know your hands won't hurt me.
The place I can't reach is still there in the distance...
The place of my peace... your heart...
I gaze at it, keeping my wish to myself...
Can I trust you...? Can I let you touch my wings?
I place in your hands my hope that springs forth...

And then I chase...
I chase the fading vapor trails.
I run, since I still can't fly
Those trails seem to be my hope, as I keep running.
But I stop, feeling your body against mine.
You look to me... and you touch my wings.
I can't walk away, for I'm drowning.
I'm drowning into the deep sea of your eyes.

The blades that turn in the sky
Always give me the same dreams
I still keep my wish to myself, but...
I feel from you something
That makes me want to let you get through...
I still gaze to the place I can't reach.
My desire... can i reach your heart?
And your answer muffles my confused being
In a moment that endures for eternity.

I look back: the sun-baked railway tracks are hidden
By stormclouds...
Even if they change their shape,
May we always remember...
The yesterdays left behind by the seasons...

My wings are now yours
My heart... you took as well...
But I gave them to you... I gave you my all...
And for me... even if I still wish to reach your heart,
Waiting for you to give it to me, for I won't steal it from you...
For me you gave me the ability to fly...
Your presence fills me with excitement,
But even if it's slippery with sweat, I won't let go of your hand, ever...

And I'm renewed by the fact
That I couldn't stay unchanged since that day...
I couldn't stay unchanged... when I met you...
©2009 =FastSpeedy
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This is a poem I wrote for someone that is too much special to me.

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:icondevonaura:
Awesine poem

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Love can be the ultamite key
and the power inside of you so
you can never be afriad of yourself
be who you are
:iconfastspeedy:
Thank you!

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:icontigroso:
awww It's sounds a little sad, but it is a beautiful poem

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Yo se que tu estas en mi, tanto como yo en ti :3

Guadalafurs
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:iconfastspeedy:
Thanks. It's a poem to someone really special, and I put all my feelings on it.

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:icontailsworld1:
....Absolutely and amazingly beautiful. There is just so much that I am told through these words...your ability to convert emotions into words...it's simply amazing. Wonderfully done!

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"Though we may never meet again, we will never for get each other"

"Where there is darkness, there is light. Where there is light, there is darkness. Exist without one means non-existance with the other."

All hail Bowser King of Koopas!!:evillaugh:
:iconfastspeedy:
Thank you very much!

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:icontailsworld1:
You are very welcome! ^__________________________^

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"Though we may never meet again, we will never for get each other"

"Where there is darkness, there is light. Where there is light, there is darkness. Exist without one means non-existance with the other."

All hail Bowser King of Koopas!!:evillaugh:
:icondevonaura:
welcome dreams will come true

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Love can be the ultamite key
and the power inside of you so
you can never be afriad of yourself
be who you are
:iconfastspeedy:
Yes. ^^

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